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Rated: 13+ · Message Forum · Contest · #1722332

Rewrite my telly scene in showy deep POV and win an upgraded year at WDC

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Dec 20, 2010 at 3:30pm
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Re: Re: Re: Review of Sunglasses
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Alex wrote:

Please don't misunderstand me, Sweet Innocent David. The sentence is well-written and showing, without telling.

What I meant by it was I'd rather be TOLD someone's anal sphincter is tightening, rather than be SHOWN an anal sphincter! LOL!
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Oooooh, Alex,
I DID misunderstand, I did, I did. I am still in Kansas..............but, I didn't know Kansas had St. Andrew's Crosses......what r they for?

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