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Rated: 13+ · Message Forum · Contest · #1722332

Rewrite my telly scene in showy deep POV and win an upgraded year at WDC

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Dec 19, 2010 at 9:25am
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Please don't misunderstand me, Sweet Innocent David. The sentence is well-written and showing, without telling.

What I meant by it was I'd rather be TOLD someone's anal sphincter is tightening, rather than be SHOWN an anal sphincter! LOL!

Alex

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