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Rated: 13+ · Message Forum · Contest · #1722332

Rewrite my telly scene in showy deep POV and win an upgraded year at WDC

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Dec 15, 2010 at 4:57pm
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Re: Review: Kiss Me, I'm Forty

True on this one, David. I didn't notice the sleeve / cuff thing. If showing is to work, the picture has to be clear.
As for the placement of the purse, lol! I was just wondering why she wasn't wearing a sport bra!!!

I guess writers can show all they want, but in the end, we all "see" different things when we read them.


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