Erotica Harem

David,
Thanks so much for the review. I've had one other reader decide they couldn't continue on with this story because of the depression. I would love to have you continue reading so I'll let you in on some of what is to come. Aran's depression will become less and less apparant through the rest of the story. She'll gain more 'strength'. Sean discover's that Aran isn't all she appears to be, thus the mystery, the man on the beach, her affinity for the water. There is a scene where her wrists are slit, but she doesn't do it. Sean will think she has, after that I hope to start writing her depression out, she'll help Sean solve the mystery of who she really is. I hope this doesn't confuse you and will allow you to maybe feel like you can read on. If any of the depression stuff bothers you, however, I will understand if you dont' want to continue.

I appreciate your comments. I'll work on the was words in the one paragraph. Dafydd is Irish Gaelic and you pronounce it Davith...short a. Also the footprint issue isn't something I thought of, but the footprints Sean found were large and barefooted. I'll have to fix that as well.

Again,
Thanks for the wonderful review.

Dragon