Reviews by Ledan Dark

After a year and a half, I'm getting back to working on my novels (both unfinished), and I need some reviews to help refine where I need to make my edits. I know theres a lot of work to be done (mainly with adding more to the story). However, it's very uncommon to be told exactly where. If you cannot or are not willing to do that, that I will be satisfied with whatever review you are willing to give.


Please Review. If possible the entire thing within a few days (I'll be making the major edits not long after I finish up the minor edits, which should be done within a week). If needed I'm more than happy to include a small donation for your trouble.

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