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Lyrically Speaking

by Elisa the Bunny Stik

Rated: 18+ · Message Forum · Opinion · #595449

Write songs much?Feel free to discuss it here(plus R&R as always).

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Jul 23, 2009 at 3:37pm

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Re: Review needed

Sounds a bit like a writing assignment. Presupposes that the reader agrees there is no future. While applaud anyone with enough nerve to write lyrics I found this a bit shallow for my taste.

SeaSalt

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Review needed · 08-20-05 12:44am
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Re: Review needed · 07-23-09 3:37pm
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