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Rated: 13+ · Message Forum · Writing · #1505517

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Jan 30, 2009 at 5:11pm
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Review: Fallen Empire-Prologue ~ Paid In Full
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*Note*My thoughts/feelings:
I think this is a very interesting dark fantasy-adventure, and I also think that there will be a lot of action scenes in this novel. The names of the characters were really new to me, and what they look like add to the reasons why this novel is interesting. I wonder where you get your ideas.

*Note*My comments/suggestions:

*Note1*Plot
The ideas of politics, religion and war were born in another world. I think the different issues in this world can also be related with things happening in the society.

*Note2*Setting
It may not be directly stated or described but the place was of another world. I still have to read the next chapters to know what kind of world was it.

*Note3*Characters
The names were uniquely made, and I think they were deeply thought of and prepared well in this novel.

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Review: Fallen Empire-Prologue ~ Paid In Full · 01-30-09 5:11pm
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