Novel Review Group Message Forum

Hi everyone!

First of all what a GREAT idea this forum is - I found on various writers' websites that it's very difficult to get critiques for chapters further into a novel and practically impossible to get feedback on a whole novel.

I promise to read and review faithfully as I desperately need feedback myself. I'm told I do well at spotting typos and repetitions, not strong on commas though... I also like to mention things I liked and why...

About me - I live in Thailand (so you'll see me posting at funny times) and have a lot of time to procrastinate about the first draft of my first ever novel. It's about elves and part of a series on magical treasures but I promise it's no LOTR ripoff. I'm afraid it's quite uneven as I have rewritten the beginning twice and the end once but the middle is pretty rough. Since I'm here on a free membership I'll put on as many chapters/words as the system allows and delete them after review,etc etc. But I'd be happy to go last i.e. in the order of joining this group so I can get the hang of things?

I'll try to stick to the format for reviews indicated but bear with me if I make mistakes at the beginning, please. I'm a techno-idiot in some respects but once I get it I'll hopefully manage the required format.

Thanks ever so much for having me and I'll have now a look at the novel/s.