Erotica Harem

Hey, Sephina;
Thanks for reading another chapter of PBD. Guess I need to get writing again, as you're catching up with the chapters I have and Bill needs something else to read

Thanks for your feedback; I'll take a look at the areas you've mentioned to edit/clarify. As for the weapon, since the hooker saw a guy running through the park with something in his hand and headed toward the building across the small lake - coupled with the fact the the roof of the building was caved in - I felt readers could infer the weapon was "tossed" away into the building; hence the reason the detectives checked it after not finding anything around in the area. No one else has pointed this out, so I felt it was understood, but I'll keep that in mind in case I need to clarify.



Jon


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