Erotica Harem

Oh, don't worry. Your reviews are very helpful. In fact, soemthings have been pointed out before and while I normally wait until I finish to revise, it was recently pointed out to me that perhaps making corrections should be done before that, chapter by chapter, and why. I admit I hadn't thought of it that way. I certainly wouldn't want people to think I ignored them or that I paid no attention. So I'm going to try this way and see how it goes. A major revision would be different. That would wait. And I figure, if a lot of people say the same things, then I should probably make those corrections as I go along cause if that many people agree, they're all probably right!

I've learned so much in this group! I couldn't have finished Affairs of the Gods without them. I arrived with a character screaming in my head and no real story but they read and liked and helped point out where my character wanted to go though she never clued me in. And when it was finished, it was contracted by the first epub I sent it to. Everyones reviews helped me revise and now it'll be released soon. It's been quite an adventure. I hope for the same success with Zoe and beleive me that wouldn't be possible without everyone here helping me. Well, off to the writing mill again. I have a few more revised chapters to post for romance forum and will be back here.

Pat

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