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Rated: XGC · Message Forum · Adult · #619464

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Mar 20, 2008 at 9:59pm
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Re: Review: Hit Man by Psionic Master
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Hi, Dragon! Thank you so much for the review! I appreciate the input. *Heart*

He paused. I could see he was debating the issue in his mind.not sure you need this underlined part, the reader will know that he’s debating in his head.
I'm very glad that you explained this for me. I guess I was underestimating the reader or my ability to portray that this debate was internal. *Smile*

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Review: Hit Man by Psionic Master · 03-20-08 5:26pm
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*Star* Re: Review: Hit Man by Psionic Master · 03-20-08 9:59pm
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Re: Re: Review: Hit Man by Psionic Master · 03-20-08 10:47pm
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