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Mar 19, 2008 at 3:48pm
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Re: REVIEW: Pretty Boy Dead: Chapter 2 by Jon1260
Scott -
Thank you for reading another chapter! Those darn long sentences! *Shock*! I can't believe you found more! Needless to say, it's an issue for me (do you think I'm long-winded too? *Smile*) that I've been working hard to get under control.

Your line edits and comments are excellent ones that I've used for the most part.

Thanks again!!! *Heart* *Heart* *Heart*


Jon


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