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Feb 26, 2008 at 9:17pm
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Re: Review: Pretty Boy Dead - Chapter One by Jon1260
Blue;
Thank you so much for reading PBD? I really appreciate your line-edit suggestions; all good ones! Yes, I've heard about the long sentences and you'll find I get much better in future chapters as I was "listening and learning" from the feedback! Thanks again!

Jon


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