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Feb 25, 2008 at 9:00pm
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Re: Review: Pretty Dead Boy: Chapter 8: Jon
Sephina;
Thank you very much for your review! Yes, I've heard the description about the police station was a bit redundant - and will work to correct that in a future revision - thanks for pointing that out again; that's three for three now, so clearly I need to revised this chapter with the previous with the mention of the police headquarters.

Again - thank you so much for reading "Pretty Boy Dead" and thank you for our feedback.

Jon


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