Erotica Harem

Thanks,Seph--I'm glad that lvoe scene did what I wanted it to--emotional impact rahter than jsut sex and it's effect on her I wanted profound--looks like it worked. and I wanted the mightmare/vision as creepy and freaky as possible. Thanks heaps. I know I sent you an email but I jsut wanted to say it here, too. I'll be working on teh dread adverbs and repetitions in the revision after *crosses fingers* I finish the ms. I rarely revise before then unless I make a major change that effects the rest of the story. Thanks again. Very insightful and helpful, as always.

Pat


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