Many thanks for your review. I really appreciate your comments and suggestions.
First of all: I CANNOT believe I let that typo in the first sentence get by me. That's what I get for changing that opening line so many bloody times.
Glad you got into this chapter and that you liked the mood. I've kept things upbeat as we learn about the characters. But now it's time for some darkness to ride into town...
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