Erotica Harem

First of all: I'm sorry for making my stuff so hard to read ; grammar - to my shame even in German - was never my strong point (although I always got my A's though). I was taught in grade 10 or so to use as less punctuation as possible because I always used it to excess. Okay, enough whining...

I'm glad you liked the chapter - or better its content; I always feared I reveal too much here.

I have to admit that Coop and Manny will reappear in the "real" story which is set about eight months later, but both aren't main characters. Since they were quite popular however when this was still public I'll think of something.

Hm, I guess I didn't care so much about smell because after such a short time even bodies that were found in warm water don't stink - maybe I'll bring in how the ... what do you call that stuff that's put into the water what smells so good, can't find in that ******* dictionary. (What a crap we poor students in Germany have to use. )

To the investigation itself: creepy girl that I am I can count seven weeks working at the morgue to the highlights of my 24 years. There you learn a lot of often crass stuff. I asked a lot of question - also the German police officers who attended the autopsies. You wouldn't believe how green some of them got while watching and they did the job maybe longer as I had years then (I was 16.) It was a good way to get basic info on investigations; first I participated in the autopsy and lab work myself, second I learnt how a morgue is arranged, hierarchy a.s.o. I never told anyone that I wanted to use it for a novel; I thought they'd laugh at me. Hm, but as it seems now it was useful, huh?

I don't ignore yours or the others grammar suggestions, but I can only do it bit by bit, because the line is so slow and I can only do it after 12 or 1 AM; before maybe phone calls come in. Just in case you wonder. Thanks again.

Buenas Noches! *BIG yawn*



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