Erotica Harem

Title: Our House

Chapter: Chapter 2

Author: Mathguy

Plot: Chad and his friend Wanda visit the new house and meet a neighbor, Wanda indicates she wanted to be their tenant. They learn from Millie the neighbor that the main house has been empty for years. Chad see's the red eyes and finds some drawings.

Setting: The new house

Characterization: I liked the new characters introduced. They added to and revealed bits of the plot. Wanda is a likable character. I love the admittance of her calling herself a "fag hag". LOL haven't heard that in a long time.


Just My Personal Opinion: The dialect of Wanda was thick in the beginning of the chapter and softened toward the end. I like the softer tone of the end of the chapter. The accent almost made her sound like an Italian hit man...kinda rough and simple it didn't go with the physical description in my mind.