Erotica Harem

Title: Our House

Chapter: Chapter 1

Author: Mathguy

Plot: Modern couple looking to purchase a house. It would seem it would be a fixer upper. Some hint of evil from the basement with the red eyes.

Setting: From the accent of the realtor, possibly the south. What part of the country we are seeing? Or did I miss it?

Characterization: Good character development. Steve and Chad have distinct personalities and the depth of their love is evident. Right off the bat you hope they find something they both love. I wanted them to find a perfect home. I found them easy to associate with and that made me want to continue reading to the next chapter.

Grammar: No typographical errors noticed.

Just My Personal Opinion: Great start to a novel. Just enough mystery to move the interest forward. I am looking forward to the next chapter.


Namaste,
Esotaria