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Feb 22, 2008 at 10:02pm
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Re: Review: Pretty Boy Dead chapter 3 by Jon1260
Dragon;
Thank you so much for reading my chapter! Yes, this chapter is darker, very difficult to write because of the murder, but I tried to capture the feelings of both characters - and yes, you'll find this chapter links to the first two. The work takes several different twists and turns, all linking together and colliding in the end.

Thanks for the line edits; you're reading this after a few revisions from many reviewers, so it appears the chapter is about locked in with just a few minor edits.

Thanks again!



Jon


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