Erotica Harem

Review: Crimson Cries

Chapter Sixteen

by Dawn

Setting: Luxor, Egypt
excellent detail--I found myself wrinkling my nose too--terrific detail in here. You didn't miss a thing.

Characters: Aiden, Daniella, DeNore

Aiden, still protective but more determined to be her backup and not interfere with ehr desire for revenge
Daniella--on the hunt with single minded determination though her feeligns for Aiden do show rather well here.
DeNora, vicius but gets her jsut deserts

Plot: AFter arriving in Luxor, Daniella and Aiden go looking for DeNora and once they find her, the battle begins, In a bloody gruesome fight to the death, (well choreographed, btw) DeNora is destryoed. The part of Daniella sucking the blood form teh heart sent chills through me and made my stomach lurch but I loved it.

Grammaticals: None noted and I wouldn';t have noticed if there had been any goofs.

Comment: This chapter sucked me in and that was all she wrote. If there were any errors, I wouldn't have noticed sicne the fight scene riveted me. I couldn't have stopped readign if I had to. Well done. Exciteing bonechilling, stomach churning--and nearlyh nauseating to this poor human but riveting. It went thorugh my mind like a film loop

Pat


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