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Jan 31, 2008 at 11:34am
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My little attempt at a sonnet
Oh, Lord my friend who gives me power
I pray to thee for my needs fulfilled
For you to satisfy me as you willed
I whisper to you for my grace and flower.
Oh, God, most true who is my friend
I wish you'd show me where to go
I've been trying hard, what don't I know?
To see my life together again.
In my calamity ,pain and hurt
I beg dear Lord,
bring back my Skirt.
For without my life is done.
Oh Lord my friend who gives me power,
I need your help again this hour.
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My little attempt at a sonnet · 01-31-08 11:34am
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Re: My little attempt at a sonnet · 01-31-08 9:22pm
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