Erotica Harem

Hi Dawn,

Thank you very much for reviewing my short story. I'm so happy you enjoyed it.

I'm sorry for not responding to your review for a while, but I was having trouble getting my computer to view previous pages in the Forum. I kept getting only the front page. Thank goodness I got it figured out and can now Thank you for this review!

You give wonderful suggestions and are very helpful catching repetitious things (like smiling). I appreciate your comments and will go back over the story to incorporate them. Too funny, I didn't realize Jessie had no description! I'll be sure to correct the matter right away. I'm usually good at describing my characters.

Didn’t she just turn around and face him already? In answer to this question, she had turned her head, but not her whole body to face him. Sorry I didn't make that one clear. I'll take another look at it.

Thank you again for reviewing this story. This is the one the E-Publisher wants, and I'd like to make it as smooth as possible. Your comments will help a lot!

Big Hugs,

Blue-Inspired (Chris)