Erotica Harem

Title of Book: Fallen Angles
Chapter #: Treehouse
Author: Ana

Setting: Foster home.


Characters: Charlene, Angie, Mooky, Jay, Mother. No physical descriptions per se, but Angie is a hermaphrodite.


Referencing: I understand now that the language is that of a child.

Plot: Introduction of deeper personal relationships.

Grammar: Okay – some commas could be used, but, other than that, it is fine.

General: I’m beginning to empathize with Charlene. I feel for her. The house is horrible, with horrible children, and she wants love. Angie is the one who gives it to her. The story makes me sad.


Keiko Alvarez
Japanese Cowgirl Author of Erotica
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