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Rated: XGC · Message Forum · Adult · #619464

We like it hot and sexy!

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Oct 25, 2007 at 8:17am
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Re: Review of Lady Jessica: Chpt. 2
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DusktilDawn - Thanks for the great review! I fixed most of your catches.

As for her abrupt decision at the end, I admit I was worried about that. That's why I had her drink a lot of wine. You may be right. I'll see what other readers think. Then again, this is the Erotica forum. Abrupt decisions to have sex aren't rare around here! :)

Thanks again. I always appreciate your comments.

Oh... Don't worry about Lady Jessica and her friend Hardigan whom you seemed, well, fond of. He'll be back, glorious curved sword and all!

TimM
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Review of Lady Jessica: Chpt. 2 · 10-24-07 4:03pm
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