Erotica Harem

Star Trek, Star Wars, etc has them all walking round on gravity controlled spaceships. *shrugs and turns on the gravity emulator*

Do you think I need to go into details such as how the gravity works? Or can that just be accepted since she's walking around and taking a shower--which indicates an invisible force holding things down? Would there be a way to work it in without it distracting from the scene? I'm not sure. I'm thinking it over. When I flick on a sci fi show, it's the drama I'm focussed on, not necessarily the mechanics of how everything works.

I have to stay true to character. If this is how her life has always been, she wouldn't be questioning how things work and the narrator wouldn't be showing those mechanics unless there was a need. She's not on the ship very long.

I am no sci fi author, Bill. There's more fiction in my sci fi than science. The more you bust me for things like that, the better--so please do. It can only make me create a stronger world.

Not quite sure on Melia's parentage other than that there are no more left like her mother. That comes up a bit later, but it's not a huge part of the plot. I don't think I need to go too much into her past (especially before birth) other than touching on her training and the characters who affected her life to make her what she is. She's more human than anything else character wise.

If you're searching for a deep scientific meaning in this tale, you won't find it. It belongs in erotic romance foremost. The character growth will be through sexual experiences and becoming close to another being.

Maybe Melia's father was Captain Kirk. He did get around a bit.