Erotica Harem

I think I like you quite a bit. You enjoy my dark, scawry, controlling characters? Heh. They're my fave to write.

Nice idea about the spaceship and the gravity. I'll have to revisit the chapter and see what I can do. Being that's it's erotic first, I tend to stay fixated on that element. Any sci fi help is greatly appreciated.

I envision the ship as a mini-battle ship, somethig appropriate for an emmisary and a small crew. I'll work on that.

As for my Cossia, Melia is half human. Mommy was a sentient alien much like a human except with purty eyes and a few tricks up her sleeve, but more about her later.

And a dictionary at the end? Nice idea. Might just do that. I try not to overpower with made-up language etc.

Thank you for the review! Great suggestions. I'm racing to the end of this tale and I plan to give myself a breather break then while I make revisions.