Erotica Harem

Hey Dawn,
I've a review for you so quit worrying.

Plot:
After their lover's spat, Aiden and Daniella have some hot bondage dominance sex in the closet. Daniella shows off her prowess and experience by handcuffing him, teasing him, using a ring and some magic fingers. Whoa. And he likes it of course. The biting scares me, but don;t change it. That's my vamp hang-up and part of the reason why I freaked myself out when I wrote In the Moon's Light. It's appropriate and fits the scene.

Setting/Description:
I felt blind as I should have being that he was blindfolded and it's in his POV. Great job.

Character Growth:
Is really about who is boss in the moment and sexual fantasy coming to fruition. Aiden gets to experience something new as well. It's also a show of affection and trust.

My Opinion:
Eh since Tim thinks I'm a dominatrix and I'm beginning to agree with him, I have to say I liked it. It shows Daniella's long time past with sex/feeding and how she uses her expertise with it. It was sexy and unusual and erotic. My dark side wants Spencer in on the action. Shame on me, but sex will further bond the three of them. Not sure if that's something you plan to explore or not.

Edits:
This was how she used (to) feed, you fool.

Daniella (She) pulled something on the device, compressing it even more around his bulging member.

Aiden had never met a woman that (who) could cum like Daniella.

Mini convulsions from her pussy continued to milk him, but the cock ring refused the release he craved for.
(I'd omit "for")

“Would you like (to) cum, Aiden?”

His toes curls (curled), his limbs shook and a sheen of sweat broke out over his entire body.