Erotica Harem

Traci,

Thank so very much for this marvelously helpful review! I will fix all the things you mention in the morning. I just can't seem to get those pesky commas right no matter how hard I try. Hmm...can't decide if I need a comma there or not. I also know about the over-use of names, another thing I'm working on.

You have also nailed this is a combination of horror and romance, with the emphasis on horror. I'm afraid this is about as specific as I'm ever likely to get in terms of the sex scenes. Thus, as much as I appreciate the reviews and the great writing here, I'm wondering how well I actually will fit in

Again, thank you so very much for this very detailed and helpful review!!!

Bill, the MathGuy
I'm not evil, I just write that way...

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