Erotica Harem

Thanks Bill!

Fabulous and detailed review. You caught some nits for me to fix. Thank you so much.

As far as the come vs. cum word choice, that is personal preference. Cum is harsher and often used in erotica. One of the reasons I use it here is because the prequel to this book was my second attempt at erotica and I'd chosen to go with harsh language rather than the softer more sensual style. I need to be consistent. Sorry if it puts you off. It was a way for me to get over swear words because when I began writing this genre, I got all goofy and embarrassed when I wrote sex scenes.

Anyhow, thank you again, so much. This helps me.

Hope you can get a tale on the boards so I can repay you.

Traci Ana