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Oct 20, 2007 at 5:38pm
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REVIEW: Kindred Blood Chapter 5
by A Non-Existent User
Title: Kindred Blood

Chapter: Five

Author: Dusktildawn

Plot: The plot thickens, Connor "calls" to Daniella and she has to go find him. That leaves Aiden needing to be kept secure at the house until she gets back. He hasn't had enough to sustain him safely. Aiden is missing!

Connor has been turned! And he is out of his mind in hunger. He has been bound and left to suffer.

Setting: Daniella's house and the cottage where Connor is held.

Characterization: Great character/vampiric developments. I love the twist of Connor being turned and Aiden's disappearance.

Grammar: no typographical errors noticed.

Just My Personal Opinion: I love this story!

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REVIEW: Kindred Blood Chapter 5 · 10-20-07 5:38pm
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Re: REVIEW: Kindred Blood Chapter 5 · 10-21-07 4:51pm
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