Erotica Harem

Review: The Lady Jessica

Chapter One

SEtting; The woods Jessica travels through, well described, and Hardigans cabin, also well described.

Characters: Fictional: Lady Jessica. Hardigan.
Lady Jessica is ruminating her fate, marriage to a man she can't stand to look at let alone have touch her. Hardigan, a thief to all appearances

Jessica and the editor of Little River Review, a small publisher
Jessica is an aspiring wuathor, apparently of erotica, caught in the act of writing erotic fiction by the editor of a small publishing house

Plot: Lady Jessica is kidnapped by Hardigan from her carriage on ehr way to meet her soon to be husband, a man she clearly despises. Hardigan takes her to hsi cabin, where they tantalize each other, she pulls his own knife on him (gutsy move, btw) Seh spies on him thorugh the keyhole as he washes up, then stares as he takes himself in hand and finally finishes dressing. Aroused, she pleasures herself until--
The interruption pops the modern Jessica out of her story, to meet an editor.

Grammaticals: None noted. If there were any I missed them.

Comment: I love the twist. The story started Lady Jessica and Hardigan, hundreds of years ago, in a little sensual scene that really sizzled. Man, you had me holding my breath wondering which would succumb to temptation first and emerge from hiding. But I really love the twist that Jessica is also a modern erotic author writing during her lunch break. It was an unexpected twist and delighted me to no end. I wonder now if the as yet nameless editor will be the modern equivalent to Hardigan. Can't wait to read more. And you show a real talent for writing sensual scenes from the female viewpoint. As usual, your sensitivity shows through. WEll done, Tim

Pat
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