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Oct 16, 2007 at 2:10am
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Review: Physical Therapy Ch 3 by DusktilDawn
Review of Physical Therapy
Chapter Three
By: dusktildawn

Plot Summary (so you can see if I 'get it' *Smirk*:
Cain and Rhea meet about Harry. her past is revealed a bit--she's been kidnapped and choked and tortured by a former stalker patient. Oh man does she have issues.
Cain reveals that Harry is into sadomaso and he's the sub. Also that he stalked his former lover. So in effect, he's warned Rhea.
She is undeniably attracted to Cain.

Settings/Descriptions:
Fantastic, down to the manicured nails and that damn annoying door.

Character Growth:
The growth is her attraction, especially since she's sworn off men.

My Opinion:
Great chapter. I especially liked the last bit of dialogue: "Are you something I need?"

Nits and Notes:
We had no other family to rely on, so it was either me, or they placed him in a foster home.
(Maybe: ...or they would place him...)

“I’m not analyzing you, Cain. I just stated a simple fact.(quotation fell off) A little sensitive, are we?

More times that (than) not, they don’t say too much, so they suppress the confusion and pain.

Before any session begins, a safe word is agreed (upon) between them, just in case things go a little overboard.”

“Should I be worried about Harry.” (<-question mark)



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Review: Physical Therapy Ch 3 by DusktilDawn · 10-16-07 2:10am
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