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Oct 15, 2007 at 6:03pm
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Re: Comments on: Urden the God of Desire, Prologue
Hi Bill.

Ack you picked me? *runs and hides*

Anyhow, I shall try to answer your questions before I zip out the door to get the kids from school. You asked if you can post public reviews. Generally the items in these forums are private items meant for the eyes of the group only. With that said, personall I have no problem with you posting your reviews og MY WORK publicly. It gets you GPs and it gets me noticed. I'm not sure how the others feel. I once posted a public review on one I reviewed in another forum and I was chewed up shortly afterwards by many people with sharp teeth. Woops. I'll never do that again.

It's safe to post a public review as long as big chunks of the manuscript are not included. *Wink*

As to the pants Enrue wears, oh my, I had best describe them clearly. Puffy purple pantaloons--sounds sexy to me. ^^ But okay, I'll make them some boring sort of color. Also I probably only need to mention them once--oops. Habere is a made-up word. I tend to base many of my works on Arabic culture and there's a bit of that in here but this is mainly futuristic. TimM busts me for my sci fi goofs. It's loosely sci fi *hides from him too*

Thank you for all your kind words. Sorry it's such a short prologue but this is a sequel and I'm following the pattern of the prior book to keep the flow.

Hope to see you post some of your work in here soon.

*Heart* Traci Ana

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