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Oct 15, 2007 at 11:04am
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Re: Review: The Meeting by Esotaria
by A Non-Existent User
Thank you Tim for the great read! Aye, the first 10 chapters or so will be a lot more choppy as I wrote this all from my head.

I remember you once said your first novel never was published. I tend to think rewriting this one will take much more work than I originally thought. I have not revised any of the original content as I am still trying to get out the story.

I WILL be making the grammatical corrections as the reviews come in and as I continue on the story I am trying to improve on the writing.

I have this folder I save tidbits from reviews, and every once in a while I read through them and list the things I need to keep in mind. TO DO and NOT TO DO *Smile* I am hoping my lists start shrinking as this next year rolls around.

Namaste,
Esotaria

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Review: The Meeting by Esotaria · 10-14-07 8:30am
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