Erotica Harem

Yes. I need to get back to Sima and Razi. The chapters are supposed to be in rotation. Enrue-Melia-Sima/Razi... And I've veered from that a bit in the spot where I am now. I can totally understand about the chapter lag and also you review so many stories, no clue how you keep everything straight!

I find it a good sign you have no sympathy for Enrue. Melia I would expect you to feel little for. Both of those characters are the ones that need growth. Sima & Razi do a bit, but not massive growth like these other two. I am having difficulty being mean to them. Need to just do it.

As for a man masturbating being erotic for a woman to read. Yes, I think it is. If these two characters are both attracted to each other and can't be together--they leave me little choice. Enrue is not a sexual charactar so for him to be so obsessive, he's changing.

Also, don't have such minimal faith in him. He's a great deal more powerful than Melia realizes. Probably more powerful than I realize.

Okay, off to try to write since hubbie is at work for a few hours.

Thank you as always.