Erotica Harem

Hey Tim.

Thanks for the review and the catches. I don't know why I leave that comma off in listings. For shame. I think it's one of those by choice commas, but I'd rather have it than not. I put them in when you bust me.

Not sure about the statue confusion. He saved them when he was in Irnia so he hopefully could trade them to the Unangi tribe in exchange for access to the Hemec fuel in the mountains. He doesn't care much for them. To him they serve no other purpose than as a bargaining tool--which is why he jokes about shooting one off at a Kyleena mothership. He's got them on show because he's putting on a show. He doesn't intend on keeping them.

As I've gotten into later chapters, I worry that I'm veering away from the erotic parts in place of plot movement/transitional chapters, and political stuff. Not sure though. I'm going to try to write today if the wee ones will let me.

Thank you!