Erotica Harem

Thanks, Dawne. Man I sure had fun writing these scenes--especially after ch/ 4. Oh, I wish he was real, too. I'd love to have dreams like that--onl;y for Cass it wasn't a dream. He's very real, still arrogant, and--well, you'll see. I'm starting to have a few interesting, I hope, ideas for chapter seven. Thanks for the suggestions. I had a little trouble with the italics since part of it she actually sees rather than it being part of the mental sharing. And the dialogue was tricky. Should I have italicized the whole sex scene part? I wanted the reader to be able to differentiate between what she was fantasizing and what she actually looked at. Hmm, the revision of this might even be fun! Thanks, heaps. And if I ever find a god like him, hmm, I might get stingy and not share but maybe he'll have a friend?

Pat

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