Thanks for the review Dawn. God, I tried to be so careful not to use the gaze word so much in this. And now heat as well. Ahhh! I'll go through the chapter again and see what I can do to alleviate some gazing and heat(ing) lol heeheehee. Ok, I'm loopy. That's ok though, I'm a writer, we're allowed and I have...let's see...where'd they go...my little pills, too. No, no not really. Thanks again.
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