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Sep 29, 2007 at 4:33am
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Re: Re: Re: Review: WIP2 Chapter 1: By Jezz
You're rigfht, Tim , we are differnet but not necessarily the way you mean. We know who we want attention from but what I saw in this chapter was what the main pov character saw--her friends *yes guys* relaxing with her and befriending her. ow, sicne the pov never entered a guy's head, I could not see that. Even if he was thinking was all he wanted was her inbed, the pov character was Kiri so it didn't eneter. But, Like I said, I was a tomboy and had male firends and everysingle one of them, no matter how they may hnanve wanted to bed me, defended me. Crystal clear. Yes, Kiri may be in trouble later, but we'll see. You also have a good point , Tim. Men reading this one chapter would see girl with guys and think not only sex but orgy sex! So, men's instinctive response is sex?

Pat
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Review: WIP2 Chapter 1: By Jezz · 09-28-07 9:03am
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Re: Re: Review: WIP2 Chapter 1: By Jezz · 09-28-07 3:21pm
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Review: WIP2 Chapter 1: By Jezz · 09-29-07 4:45am
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Review: WIP2 Chapter 1: By Jezz · 09-29-07 7:10am
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Review: WIP2 Chapter 1: By Jezz · 09-29-07 7:53am
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Review: WIP2 Chapter 1: By Jezz · 09-29-07 11:21pm
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