Erotica Harem

Another well written chapter, Sasha. I can see all the research you've done with this one too. Just a few things I noticed.

He could hear the moans men drifting up through the planking. Missing a word? He could hear the moans from men (?)

“South south east, Barney.” Do you mean: South, southeast (?)

The beat to quarters immediately (?) followed immediately.

He dropped the glass and looked at the glass-like (hyphen) surface. Still unable to see anything, he tried his glass (Is this needed? There is a lot of "glass" words here.) again.

The master tacked The Sword,

But sealegs…that the lass just doesn’t have.

And our meager crew of twenty-five (hyphen) just couldn’t...