I understand your desire to garner some male perspective reviews...it's always a good thing. You could e-mail the other Sultans of the Harem. Paul is always very supportive.
I'm not sure why either of them disappeared, but it might be worth a shot.
I wouldn't worry about adding personality issues diluting "interest". If anything, if more chemistry (not sex) is introduced between the two, it becomes much more interesting.
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