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Jul 5, 2007 at 2:27pm
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This is the beginning of a novel I hope to have published one day, so I'd greatly appreciate any comments you have:
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Fear. Depression. Love. Angst. These things surround Thoughtless Irony and Spiral, two bands who know nothing of each other...at first. The thing that ties them together: a choreographer by the name of Brea Johnson. What will happen when these two bands’ worlds merge?
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