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I'm a stickler for characters. I'll review your fiction. That's all.

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Jun 6, 2007 at 2:41am
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Would love some criticism.
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I'm new here and would love some feedback on what I've written. If you're not into sword and sorcery, it may not appeal to you, even though it doesn't contain that many fantastic elements as of now. Still, give it a shot if you're interested.

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The Culmination of a Conspiracy and the Death of a Young Warrior
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Would love some criticism. · 06-06-07 2:41am
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