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I'm a stickler for characters. I'll review your fiction. That's all. |
I'd like you to review my piece linked below. I'm specifically interested in knowing how you percieve the main character and his motivation. There is really only one supporting character I know is weak, but regardless, off with the gloves and have at, I am no sissy. http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1247278 |