Review: Diary of Daniella Rolfe, DusktilDawn , chapter 4
by A Non-Existent User
Thanks so much, Shells. Gees, you're on a roll here. I agree with you about that comma, and I fixed that quotation mark too. Thanks again.
Just wait about Dixie (Patti) ... you'll get to know a little more about her. I tried my best to bring even the secondary characters a little to life (Dixie and Barlow) I sure hope you continue enjoying it. I've submitted this to a publisher and I'm just waiting for my rejection. Then it'll be back to square one and submit someplace else. I won't know unless I try, right?
Big hugs and bigger thanks, Shells,
Dusk
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