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Feb 27, 2007 at 5:51pm
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Re: Re: Re: More questions...
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Excellent point, Bridget! And that makes my job all the more easier too when I write his part into it. Say, after the sinning act, instead of opening the chapter with him seeing what's going on (because as Traci pointed out, her character may not have anyone, she could be dreaming/masturbating all by herself, and Valèn comes to her and goads her on). In chapters like this, he can end it with his own thoughts on what just happened. This can go so many ways, with so many things. It just depends on how the author writes their chapters.

D.

P.S. Maybe we should have had a pow-wow session beforehand. *Bigsmile* Shells has offered to write the sin of "anger" so we need Frankie to jump in and pick a sin too.

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More questions... · 02-27-07 5:28pm
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