Hmmm. I like the evil ones in the beginning. Maybe Carol is right though. What's sexy about Hitler? *gags*
Here's the thing. Val is a demon. He's gotta be evil in the beginning and way bored with his evil ways to go off seeking others. Whether his pets be known or anonymous, I do like that you've got them so gross and vile. Val doesn't want that anymore. He wants to change like any moving character in any novel. The HEA has to be his and maybe it's an HEA for all these folks he crosses paths with in the anthology. Maybe it's about coming to terms with these sins and accepting that, good or not, these sins are a part of who these people are.
And Val accepts them the way they are and even encourages them to commit these sins in order to get closer, more intimate with each one.
Ok, Dawn, my leader dear. Is what I had up okay for the storyline? No penetration. But he can torment the heck out of my character. Right? Geez that sounds so dirty. *shakes head* What's become of my clean mind?
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