Erotica Harem

Let me get a handle on this....Tell me if I am not understanding what we are supposed to write...

Okay....... the main character (like my guy is pride/arrogance) we have one in each of our chapters ...and this guy who shows pride / arrogance is supposed to have sex or a sex act with someone and after the sexual act and they are as bad as Jeffrey Dahlmer, Jack the Ripper and etc.... this is supposed to resort in a death of the victim? Is that correct?

Dawn's writing is exquisite as usual...but I'm not sure if that set up is erotic.....what do you all think?



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