Thanks again. I did the revisions. I looked back and realized Sima gave herself up because she assumed she'd get handed over to her father not Leuj. If she was thinking, she'd realize Leuj wants her more.
I'm stuck in this book. The Shan-Sei series over in fantasy has been pulling at me. But tomorrow I'm hoping the kids will go to the grans and I can focus here on some sexy tension. Sometimes I write my characters into situations that I don't see a way out of. The chapter I'm in now is like that. Wish me luck!
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